Friday, September 16, 2011

Cross country

All of the senior school walked to the point engalnd reserve. Everybody had to wait for Mr Burt. TJ and I got bored so we started playing with the grass, we were chucking it at each other, it was fun until Gabriel started putting grass down my back he was been annoying.

¨Finally¨ I said as Mr Burt had arrived to the reserve. ¨Can the the ten year olds come to the starting line please¨said one of the teachers  ¨Oh well I guess that´s me¨ I thought. We all walked up to the start line, I was thinking what place I might come.¨Take Your Mark, Get Set, GO¨ Shouted Mr Burt.

I started to sprint, as I got to the shelly path I started to think of an idea. I thought that I just might, by the slightest, get a reasonably good placing. Sadly I didn´t. The environment was clean and the air was fresh it felt nice.The track was made of dirt and sand it felt funny when you walked,ran or jogged on it it was like a special isolated island.

I started to jog when I was half way to the finish line I started getting tired so slowed down  Mohammad had sped up to me I started to sprint again. I finished. I had beaten Mohammad.I wonder what I came.


  1. Well done Jacob,

    I like how you used interesting vocab Jacob.What did you come in cross country?I came 2nd.Lorenzo came 1st.Did you enjoy cross country?Well done Jacob,Keep it up.

  2. Sorry Jacob can you please write back.Thank you

  3. What a great story about cross country it is really brilliant out of all the class I like yours. But there are two pears of mistakes.

  4. Wow Jacob you have a very good story about Cross Country
    even me myself can't write that good of a story you haver very interesting word s that I've never heard before.

    KEEP IT UP Jacob because you never know when I will come back on your blog


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