Zyrin and Jacob sentences

I have been learning to add detail to the beginning, middle and end of my sentences. Which one do you like the best?



J.D. It is only a few weeks until Christmas I am so looking forward to it.

Zyrin Parkin. My family and I are looking forward to Christmas.

J.D. I am looking forward to the extremely awesome Christmas.



J.D I am looking forward to my family coming for Christmas especially my cousins Iziah and Tim to come over.

Zyrin Parkin. I am looking forward to seeing my nana and pop on christmas.

Zyrin Parkin. I am looking forward to getting my special present on Christmas.



J.D. I am looking forward to the ultimate, exciting , amazing, awesome and fantastic christmas experience.

Zyrin Parkin. I am looking forward to the most best Christmas in the world.

 
J.D. I am looking forward to Christmas, and seeing my family.