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Thursday, February 21, 2013

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I was breathing heavily with exhaustion I was sweating so much I felt dehydrated. When I ran I felt the blood pumping through the back off my head and my pulse pounding me in the chest. I felt like giving up but I kept going and was running beside my team members in case they needed to pass the ball to me. When I was running I felt my feet stomping on the ground leaving a footprint.
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  1. Toni NuaFebruary 25, 2013 at 10:27 AM

    I like the way you have really thought about using your word to 'show not tell' your audience Jacob - well done!
    If you can master this you will really have your audience hooked.

    Mrs Nua

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