Wednesday, March 20, 2013
Tent pitching
Last week I helped put the tents up for the year 5 and 6’s. There were a lot of tents to put up I helped put up about six tents and straightened heaps of pegs.
My cousin
My cousin Iziah is Medium build very thin hair and a horrible sense of humor. He likes the same things that I like A.K.A Game consoles, computers, scooter riding, swimming and going to IZEAL. He is as thin as a meerkat and as tall a baby giraffe.
Monday, March 11, 2013
Show not tell
Today was a very sunny day. It was so warm I felt like I was being cooked alive. When I put water on my face I heard it make sssssss noise. I listened as the water evaporated into steam.
Monday, March 4, 2013
04/03/13 Writing test
This morning we all completed our first writing sample for 2013. I have posted just as I wrote it in the 40 minutes that we were given, So that throughout the year I will be able to look back and reflect on the the progress I have made in my writing. I will post my learning goals from this soon.
On Monday the fourth of February I arrived to school. I noticed that the slide on the park had disappeared and the flying fox had disappeared as well. I thought they might be getting a new slide and flying fox but I was wrong. I walked into my classroom to put my bag away. As I walked out I was shocked the sky had faded away I was worried that the atmosphere had disappeared too luckily not.
The lunch bell had rung so I ran to the breeze for a second I was running in the and then I ended up outside. I was starting be afraid every time I looked away from something it disappeared. Forty minutes had gone past but the bell hadn't rung I was walking I wondered where all the people left to. I looked at a class wall and realized that the bells were gone so were all the people.
I thought someone was playing a mean trick on me. The whole world was fading away the grass went grey buildings crumbled into dust planes got ripped to pieces by a black hole. The ground concrete disappeared I was falling and falling and falling. Soon all of the remaining parts of earth were gone everything turned into a white dimension. All life was gone except for me.
I was sad and upset I looked at my arms and my hands had faded too. My entire body was fading into the oxygen only my head was left all I could say was “GOODBYE”.
On Monday the fourth of February I arrived to school. I noticed that the slide on the park had disappeared and the flying fox had disappeared as well. I thought they might be getting a new slide and flying fox but I was wrong. I walked into my classroom to put my bag away. As I walked out I was shocked the sky had faded away I was worried that the atmosphere had disappeared too luckily not.
The lunch bell had rung so I ran to the breeze for a second I was running in the and then I ended up outside. I was starting be afraid every time I looked away from something it disappeared. Forty minutes had gone past but the bell hadn't rung I was walking I wondered where all the people left to. I looked at a class wall and realized that the bells were gone so were all the people.
I thought someone was playing a mean trick on me. The whole world was fading away the grass went grey buildings crumbled into dust planes got ripped to pieces by a black hole. The ground concrete disappeared I was falling and falling and falling. Soon all of the remaining parts of earth were gone everything turned into a white dimension. All life was gone except for me.
I was sad and upset I looked at my arms and my hands had faded too. My entire body was fading into the oxygen only my head was left all I could say was “GOODBYE”.
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