Monday, March 4, 2013

04/03/13 Writing test

This morning we all completed our first writing sample for 2013. I have posted just as I wrote it in the 40 minutes that we were given, So that throughout the year I will be able to look back and reflect on the the progress I have made in my writing. I will post my learning goals from this soon.

On Monday the fourth of February I arrived to school. I noticed that the slide on the park had disappeared and the flying fox had disappeared as well. I thought they might be getting a new slide and flying fox but I was wrong. I walked into my classroom to put my bag away. As I walked out I was shocked the sky had faded away I was worried that the atmosphere had disappeared too luckily not.

The lunch bell had rung so I ran to the breeze for a second I was running in the and then I ended up outside. I was starting be afraid every time I looked away from something it disappeared. Forty minutes had gone past but the bell hadn't rung I was walking I wondered where all the people left to. I looked at a class wall and realized that the bells were gone so were all the people.

I thought someone was playing a mean trick on me. The whole world was fading away the grass went grey buildings crumbled into dust planes got ripped to pieces by a black hole. The ground concrete disappeared I was falling and falling and falling. Soon all of the remaining parts of earth were gone everything turned into a white dimension. All life was gone except for me.

I was sad and upset I looked at my arms and my hands had faded too. My entire body was fading into the oxygen only my head was left all I could say was “GOODBYE”.

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