Monday, February 20, 2012

Monday Mornings

I am learning to write an introduction that hooks in my audience.
Here are 3 versions. Which Monday Morning introduction do you like the best?

“AAARRRRGGGGHHHH” I shouted when my mum called out for me to make her morning coffee while I am usually still tired and in bed. Especially on Mondays.

This morning I didn't want to wake up because I was tired. My brother opened the door all I could hear was a squeak he came in and threw a soft toy at me. I got up and threw back and got back in bed.

When it comes to Monday mornings I don’t like it when you need to get your uniform,socks and shoes ready for school. It would be easier if school started at 12:30! So someone can get a good sleep-in.

Well that's just what I think.

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